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A 5-feet text

We were exchanging texts.



"How you feeling, beautiful?"

"I feel sick…"

"There's this girl here with a red cardigan… she look pretty."

"Really? Prettier than me?"

"As pretty as you… Well, I can't decide. I might fall in love with her if it's not because of you…"

"Oh, man… you are so easily seduced… not loyal! Now I have to think twice!"

"Of course not lah. Like I've said, I have you already."

"You better choose now!"

"I don't have to choose! I'm yours! I love you."

"Love you too, B."

"How you feeling, my love?"

"Feeling worse. Which is why I'm here. Can we cuddle now? And scare the people around us?"



I went over to her just two seats away.

Baby was at the clinic after work waiting for me to get her. When I got there, there isn't any seat left. It wasn't dramatic of me moving beside her, but it did confuse a couple nearby.

Yes. She's the only one in red.

14 comments:

  1. I'm smitten by this post. Completely.

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  2. Hmmmm...am still wondering where the 5-feet fit in when I heard my brain shouting "Oh no! get your head out of the gutter!". LOL

    No, just kidding. Seriously. Sexy post. Can propose this as a storyboard to a telco :)

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    1. Dirty, Andrea, you!

      Thanks! Any real stories are good story. Till we get a telco client…

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  3. right out of the pages of a Jeffrey Archer's short stories. well thought out!

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    1. It wasn't inspired by anyone, doc. But I'l take that as a compliment, though. Thanks!

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  4. Brilliant, just brilliant. And oh, so funny. My boyfriend and I did something like that once before too. I should blog it as a response to your post.

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    1. Do share, GoldFish. Would love to see how yours turned out. :D

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  5. Dropping by to say GONG XI FA CAI, Birthie!!

    Got balik kampung anot?

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    1. Kung hei fat choi, GoldFish!

      No, not this year. Just spent around in KL. How about you? Gone anywhere?

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  6. Eh? How come? Work commitments?

    And no la, I'm studying over seas so there's nowhere to go. Plus, the weather is too cold to go out for CNY makans.

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    1. No lah. Many relatives were either out of the country or not going back kampung this year. It would be rather quiet if we do. So, just stay back in KL lor.

      Oh, yeah hor. You are in UK…

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