15.1.13

A 5-feet text

We were exchanging texts.

"How you feeling, beautiful?"

"I feel sick…"

"There's this girl here with a red cardigan… she look pretty."

"Really? Prettier than me?"

"As pretty as you… Well, I can't decide. I might fall in love with her if it's not because of you…"

"Oh, man… you are so easily seduced… not loyal! Now I have to think twice!"

"Of course not lah. Like I've said, I have you already."

"You better choose now!"

"I don't have to choose! I'm yours! I love you."

"Love you too, B."

"How you feeling, my love?"

"Feeling worse. Which is why I'm here. Can we cuddle now? And scare the people around us?"



 I went over to her just two seats away.

Baby was at the clinic after work waiting for me to get her. When I got there, there isn't any seat left. It wasn't dramatic of me moving beside her, but it did confuse a couple nearby.

 Yes. She's the only one in red.
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14 comments:

  1. Dottie With DotsJanuary 16, 2013 at 9:53 AM

    I'm smitten by this post. Completely.

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  2. The thumb in every pieJanuary 17, 2013 at 11:10 PM

    Hmmmm...am still wondering where the 5-feet fit in when I heard my brain shouting "Oh no! get your head out of the gutter!". LOL

    No, just kidding. Seriously. Sexy post. Can propose this as a storyboard to a telco :)

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    1. BirthieJanuary 21, 2013 at 10:26 PM

      Dirty, Andrea, you!

      Thanks! Any real stories are good story. Till we get a telco client…

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  3. docJanuary 21, 2013 at 2:00 AM

    right out of the pages of a Jeffrey Archer's short stories. well thought out!

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    1. BirthieJanuary 21, 2013 at 10:30 PM

      It wasn't inspired by anyone, doc. But I'l take that as a compliment, though. Thanks!

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  4. tehgoldfishJanuary 26, 2013 at 6:40 AM

    Brilliant, just brilliant. And oh, so funny. My boyfriend and I did something like that once before too. I should blog it as a response to your post.

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    1. BirthieJanuary 27, 2013 at 6:16 PM

      Do share, GoldFish. Would love to see how yours turned out. :D

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  5. tehgoldfishJanuary 28, 2013 at 6:02 AM

    And it's posted! :D

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  6. tehgoldfishFebruary 11, 2013 at 8:42 AM

    Dropping by to say GONG XI FA CAI, Birthie!!

    Got balik kampung anot?

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    1. BirthieFebruary 18, 2013 at 1:09 AM

      Kung hei fat choi, GoldFish!

      No, not this year. Just spent around in KL. How about you? Gone anywhere?

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  7. tehgoldfishFebruary 24, 2013 at 11:08 PM

    Eh? How come? Work commitments?

    And no la, I'm studying over seas so there's nowhere to go. Plus, the weather is too cold to go out for CNY makans.

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    1. BirthieFebruary 28, 2013 at 1:32 AM

      No lah. Many relatives were either out of the country or not going back kampung this year. It would be rather quiet if we do. So, just stay back in KL lor.

      Oh, yeah hor. You are in UK…

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